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He hadn't meant for things to end like this.

He was the Robin Hood type—stealing from the rich to give to the poor—and she had been the damsel in distress.

They had met only a few weeks before, but that was all it took for their love to blossom. She was a young, pretty thing, but with a father who had a heart of stone, and he was a wanted criminal, with only the rough but loving Little John to call his family.

No, scratch that last part.

He never would have guessed that Little John would have fallen for her too; it wasn't like that in the storybooks.

"We're brothers!" The plea was desperate, unbelieving, denying, and was met by a single word, spoken so coldly that it could have frozen Hell over.

"Were."

Could it really end like this?

Her hand tightened in his, and it was hard for his tears not to join hers. He was the hero, and he had to be strong, even as everything was falling apart; he had to be strong, for her.

"Please…" The thief gave a slight shake of his head, his light blue eyes never leaving the gun. "Please. If not for me, then for her."

The weapon shook, in the betrayer's hands, and then was lowered. The world froze for the space of that one moment, then the moment was over and the barrel of the gun was shoved into the smaller boy's chest.

The thief closed his eyes.

Would it really end like this?

In the silence, an echo came, of the retort of a gun.

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For :iconudonnodu:'s .
I wanted to write, and she suggested that we make up the story for her picture.

And also for :icondeviant365:'s Task 152
It is said that oil and water don't mix. Well, without the ability to do it to some degree, we'd be without those wonderful things called emusions and the cooking and chemistry worlds would be signifigantly the poorer.

Pick two diametric opposites, such as fire & water, hate & love, wolves & Sarah Palin, and creatively combine them in an artwork in whatever way you think will blow our socks off the most.


I went with love and hate.

What you see above is what came out. I wrote it in about twenty minutes, give or take a few. No editing has been done to this, so if you see typos, tell me!

I will definently be expanding this later, maybe even into a novel. I really like this idea, and the image speaketh to me.

Other characters inspired by pictures:
Task 17 - Innocent Crimson "Please! I have a wife… three kids…"

The cloaked figure didn't say a word, but simply continued to walk forward, towards the pinned and cringing figure. She lifted up her arm, a dagger clenched in her hand. The blade was short, the size of her pinkie, but the silvery weapon gleamed, testifying of the damage that it could do.

"I've always been loyal to the King! Always paid my full taxes! Never caused any trouble!"

Still the shadow didn't speak. No, it wasn't her place to question. She had been told to kill this man, and so she would.

"I'm begging you!"

She paused, only a few feet away from him now. Her cloaked head ti
Task 34 - A Daring Escape They all called it a daring escape.

A pirate and a slave, outwitting the guards and the officers of the Royal Navy. Nothing like that had ever happened before, not by two nobodies. With each telling of the tale, it was elaborated, dramatized, embellished.

But what nobody told about was how the act was born of pure desperation.

What nobody told about was how scared the slave had been, that she and the pirate wouldn't make it out alive.

What nobody told about was how terrified the pirate had been, of losing her.

Those little facts always were lost, in stories such as these. After all, it diminished the magic of the tale, to know
White Houses Thomas stared through the window at the large building of Sylan. The place was different from any other school that he had seen. Instead of looking as if it was a prison, it looked safe—a place to escape. Surely he could fit in here. This place was for kids that were different, troubled. This place was for kids like him.

As the worn car pulled into the small parking area, however, a twinge of unease knotted in his stomach. He brushed the feeling aside, just thinking it to be nothing more than nervousness. He drew in a deep breath and then climbed out of the car, ignoring the words of his caretaker as she spoke about how this new exper

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*Unodu Jun 2, 2011  Student Digital Artist
sounds awesome! :D i like the ending, still has a bit of a cliff hanger even though it's almost certain he dies!
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~CaseyJewels Jun 2, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks! And 'almost certain' are the key words. :iconshiftingeyesplz:

I have my secrets!
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:iconiamthelivingshadow:
Not bad. I really like the ending but I'm not to sure about the start. Anyway good work!
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~CaseyJewels Jun 2, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks! I wasn't so sure where I was going when I started this, so that might be part of the problem.
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:iconiamthelivingshadow:
Your welcom I was glad to help.Maybe you could start off the story with the person who gets shot remembering back to when say he had a fight with the guy who has the gun over the girl. He then ran away with the girl leaving the guy with the gun angry and wanting payback. Then you could add on your ending. I hope that this may help you with your story. Good luck!
P.S I'm alsways here to talk to if you need help writing.
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~CaseyJewels Jun 3, 2011  Student Writer
Eh. We'll see, we'll see. I don't have time to do edits at the moment, as I have to write an essay today, as well as my other homework.

Thanks! I'll keep that in mind.
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:iconiamthelivingshadow:
Your welcome. I hope that you do well in your essay. In a way we're in the same boat because I have to write an essay too and it's due on Monday. =(
But I hope that you'llbe able to tweek the story because I think that you could write it really well.
Anyway good luck with you essay and anything else that you need some luck for!
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~CaseyJewels Jun 4, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks! And I wish you luck on your essay as well.

And thanks for the kind words! It'll mostly be finding the time, methinks.
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:iconiamthelivingshadow:
Thanks! I probably will need all the luck I can get for the essay, hopefully i will get a good mark!
Well I hope that you will be able to find the time to write the story, and hopefully you will also get a good mark too!

Bye for now not forever
Shadow.
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~CaseyJewels Jun 12, 2011  Student Writer
You're welcome! Hehe. And yes, hopefully we'll both do well on our essays, and I'll find the time to edit this piece.
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